Tell us your ghostly tales...I love writing comps and what better chance than Halloween.
So write a SHORT (try to keep to a few paragraphs, please) scary story fit to tell around the Halloween bonfires.
Rules: The characters must be Stardoll Members (preferably members of this blog) AND
at least 1 of the characters must be a writer for this blog (ex: Emorox4eva. Bluegreen86, Filipinhamaria, Ewonline, Findurlove, John_2_el_mejor, Colleenp87, MissCunha or DieBrInI06)
Story must be ORIGINAL (Written by you).
Put the story in comments!
Last day to enter OCTOBER 19th!
WIN: Winner will get to be a writer for this blog, PLUS $50sd AND Rare Vintage Orange/black Amanda Scarf.
*If non-superstar you will be made superstar.
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Midnight
One night, John_2_el_mejor invited hundreds of people to come to his mansion to celebrate the success of his new book. There was a strange woman there who he did not even know. John_2_el_mejor did not remember inviting her. Her name was Midnight, and she never talked much. After the party, she asked John_2_el_mejor if she could stay there because she lived very far, and it was getting late. John_2_el_mejor agreed, and showed her to the guest room. The next day, Midnight refused to leave. John_2_el_mejor thought it was odd that she did not want to go home, but decided to let her stay one more night. The following day, Midnight still wouldn’t leave, and John_2_el_mejor was starting to think that Midnight was up to something.
He asked her, “Shouldn’t you be going home?” John_2_el_mejor paused for an answer, but Midnight said nothing. This continued for 3 months until December 31st, New Year’s Eve, the midnight of the year.
Midnight greeted John_2_el_mejor with a, “Happy New Year’s Eve!”
John_2_el_mejor replied, “A new year, a new home? Please?” Midnight ignored John_2_el_mejor’s reply. Later, at dinner, John_2_el_mejor complemented Midnight on the scrumptious meal that he ate. That night, John_2_el_mejor did not sleep well, but he did not know why. He had the strangest dream. He was cutting something… He thought he might be dreaming of cooking, but he did not know how to cook. Maybe the dream was teaching him how to cook! John_2_el_mejor had always wanted to learn how to cook, so he moved his hand and followed the directions in the dream.
Once John_2_el_mejor woke up on New Year’s Day, he checked his email. He had 835 new messages to check, but he only checked one that day. That one was from Midnight, who never wrote him emails, as he was in the house most of the time, and she could just go into his room to talk to him. He opened the email. The computer screen showed:
Thank you!
Midnight M. midnight1231@yahoo.com
Friday, December 31, 2007 12:00:00 PM
To: John_2_el_mejor@johnbooks.org
John_2_el_mejor,
I will be going now. Thank you for everything you did for me, including something you did to me...
-Midnight
After John_2_el_mejor read it, he was relieved that she was leaving; Midnight was really starting to bother him. Then, on the second time reading it, he noticed “12:00:00 PM” and “you did to me...” The time shocked him, why would Midnight send him an email while she was supposed to be sleeping? Why did Midnight send an email at midnight, the time of her name? When did John_2_el_mejor ever do anything special to Midnight? He was troubled for the rest of the day and couldn’t concentrate on the new book he was writing.
He called the police after a few hours of not successfully writing any part of his book, and told them about this strange incident. The police came and walked around the house and moved around John_2_el_mejor’s belongings. The moving around of things made John_2_el_mejor become extremely annoyed, so he rudely told the police to stop moving them around. The police left because of his rudeness.
John_2_el_mejor thought to himself, “I don’t need them to figure out what happened; I’ll do it myself.” With that thought in mind, he went searching for clues, but did not find any. He had searched all over the house, except for Midnight’s old room. John_2_el_mejor never thought of the obvious because as an author, he was always indirect when thinking about ideas. When John_2_el_mejor finally thought of Midnight’s room, he went into the room and peered over at the bed. He saw Midnight. She was lying there, motionless.
Dang it. Jenna's guestbook is closed off. Maybe I'll ask it here, and hope she gets it-?
For my story, I wrote a really good scary story for school last year, but of course I didn't write it about Stardoll members. I can and did change one of the character's names, but for the other one, the whole story revolves around her name. What should I do?
hmm not sure maybe there's a stardoll member with the name you used...
Garden of Shadows :
She looked around her eyes filled with fear, where was she what was she doing here. Roses, so many beautiful roses in all shades of red black, but the thorns are sharp. what was it that had bough her here. Her big blue eyes filled with tears as her long brown hair clung to her body. A song, she remembered a beautiful song then nothing just sweet utter bliss of the night. Why was she brought here, she must have been. Mother had warned her never to keep her window open at night but the air was so stuffy and warm she longed for the cool breeze, and the song that had filled her room was so peaceful it was like a blanket of sleep for her. But now she realized it was a blanket of death used to hide the truth of it's evil wicked doing's. What was going to happen to her, she was freighted and wanted to go home but knew alas it was all hopeless. Shadows danced around the hedges of the maze like structure and she ran, out of fear and helplessness. Her simple white night gown almost tripping her bare feet with each step but she ignored this as the shadows loomed in on her. What was to become of her, was she the only one here? The shadows creep up on her gaining speed as if this chase merely provided entertainment. She came to a stop as a large shadow stood in her way standing tall and hovering over her shaking form. She breathed heavily and looked behind her as the other shadows joined around her in a circle almost taunting a quiet laughter at her futile attempt to escape. She knew then that this Garden of shadows was to be her grave. She only wished now that the song would carry her into the darkness and away from the beast that surrounded her.
what a cool idea!!!
i'm crap at creative writing but i look forward to see what other people write and i may even attempt to write one:o should be amusing!!!
AllisonMyeisha was this written by you? It sounds like an excerpt from a book?
Please read the rules. It must be written by you and it must be about people on Stardoll.
This is awesome !!
I love writing, oohh, can't wait !!
I will probably post it on my starblog x]]
Daisygirlz
Daisygirlz it must be written here as it says in the directions. It will not be checked anywhere else. Sorry
Hey, I'm really interested in entering this, could I just ask a question before I enter?
I'd just like to know if the story could be based upon an urban legend, my idea is to use an old urban legend but to twist it around a little, if not I'll go in another direction.
Thanks. Ryan.
A Puzzle:
PART 1.
20th October-
'Hi everyone! Halloween is only 11 days away, I can't wait! On halloween night, there will be a big party at the blog on a big chat box I will post up, and I will reveal all the comp winners! Good luck! Jenna XOXO'
Wow! A chat box party, it sounds so awesome! But I am supposed to be going trick or treating with Cherries648. Oh well, this is the party not to miss! Im sure she will understand! I (x_tammii3_x) thought to myself.
I better tell Cherries648 about my new plans. I know, I'll email her! Im too busy to choose my Medolls outfit at the moment.
'Hi Cherries648!
I know we were supposed to go Stardoll Trick or Treating in halloween night, but emorox4eva is throwing a party at the blog,I cant miss it! Sorry. From x_tammii3_x :))'
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22nd October-
'Hey Guys, better get your party outfits ready, caus there will be a best dresses list from the night, and the winners will get 25sd each! Stay at the blog, because I will be posting every day leading up to halloween with contests and halloween suprizes! Jenna XOXO'
I still can't decide on my outfit, better log on and see if Cherries648 has replied yet. Oooh! I got mail, I bet its from her.
'Hi x_tammii3_x.
Well, I have been looking forward to this for some time now. But don't worry. I will find something betterto do on halloween. You enjoy your party...'
It was from Cherries648. She seemed kinda upset, but she will be okay. Now, my outfit!!
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25th October-
'Hey. Is this just me being all halloween spirited, but did anyone else get the feeling someone is watching them? The other day I thought I heard someone talking to themselfs when I was on Stardoll. Weird. Jenna XOXO'
Oh poor Jenna. But I didn't think much of it. I mean, its halloween! Your friends are probally just messing with you. Anway, I sent mail to Cherries648, but she hasn't replied, and she has been online. Its kinda odd.
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28th October-
'Hi everyone. Does anyone know where Jenna has gone? She said she would post every day, and she hasn't replied to my mail, and she hasn't been on for 3 days. Does anyone know anything about tihs? John xx'
Mmm, thats odd. Jenna was talking about some strange stuff happening to her, and now she has just dissapeared. And its not like her to let the blog down. And Cherries648 isn't replying to me! Its been really odd the past few days...
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29th October-
'Hello, its Bluegreen86. About Jenna being missing and not talking to anyone. Well the other day I got some Stardoll mail from her. It said *Hello, no please! Aaaahh! Im sorry, I didnt understand! I want this.* I was kinda freaked out. It sounded like a story, but using very few words. And I think John has dissapered too. We were on chat talking about the party, and he randomley logged off. But ;ater that night, he logged back on, but wasn't himself. I will post tomorrow. Mel xxx'
Okay, this is getting weired now. But they are all the blog writers, they are probally just joking around with us. Right? ....
The Puzzle:
PART 2.
30th October-
Well its nearly the end of the day, and Mel still hasn't posted. John hasn't been online, and there is still no sign of Jenna. Things are getting a little weired now. But like I said, probally just some joke...
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31st October-
'Heyy Everyone! Happy Halloween! Findurlove here, I know its been kinda weired with Jenna, John and Mel the past few days, but they won't miss there blogs Halloween party, so be here tonight! Maggie x'
Phew! I saw lots of post from the other blog writers, so everything must be okay. Thank goodness! Can't wait for the party! But I still need to talk to Cherries648, she replied the other say, she told me she was too busy for little games anymore and is taking it to the next level. I don't really know what she meant though...
(LATER THAT NIGHT)
'Yay! First post! I can't wait for the party to start!' MizzAly posted. Followed by some other followers in the party mood.
I didn't make a post just yet, but then there was a post from Blueberry-dream saying 'Has anyone seen Jenna or the other writers? They should be here by now...'
I found that curious too. NONE of the writers were here. Then I saw Cherries648 enter the chatroom, I was happy to see her, and emidiatley started to talk to her.
'Cherries648! Where have you been? All the blog writers are missing and...' I said.
'Haha... thats what you get...' Cherries648 wrote. Everyone in the chat stopped talking.
'They all got what they diserved. I wanted to go trick or treating with you but you would rather come here! So I went and talked to Jenna to see if she could start it 1 hour later. She said no. And I spoke to the other writers 1 by one. Haha, they never saw it coming...' She wrote again.
'What do you mean!?!?!?!' Leena_Likey wrote.
'Its a puzzle. Work it out. Haha!' Cherries648 wrote. I was getting scared, so I turned off my computer, and I started to hear chanting, like Jenna and the other writers heard. It was a puzzle. And I had worked it out.
‘’Why are you doing this to me?!’’ screamed John, who was being hung from the ceiling, the cord loose around his throat.
‘’As I have told you darling, this is a little game between you and me,’’ Filipa sneered.
‘’But this isn’t fun!’’
‘’Oh, don’t worry dear, after it’s all over you’ll have lots of fun.’’ Filipa lowered the level and smiled her malevolence smile at him. The air was filled with shrieks of agonizing pain.
‘’Stop! Please! I’ve done no wrong!’’
‘’All 10 year olds say that, hun. You’re just another lousy bratty kid.’’ Her voice echoed in John’s ears, leaving him terrified. What had he done wrong?! He didn’t deserve to be kidnapped whilst going back home from school, forced to live without food for 3 days then hung from a cord attached to the ceiling. Surely he didn’t deserve to be a human experiment. But Filipa and her 2 devious sisters obviously didn’t give a thought to this, and as they joined her they all smiled at one another, communicating without words.
‘’Well done Filipa. Me and Jenna would have never thought that you’d succeed in honouring the family tradition. We always thought you were too nice.’’
‘’Yes indeed, Lilla. We are incredibly proud of you.’’
‘’Always happy to fulfil the family requirements, sisters. And now we enjoy.’’ They both laughed whilst staring at John, hung high from the cords. Little by little, Filipa arranged the machine to strangle him slowly and as painfully as possible. As John screamed his last scream, his head hung low and the sisters all nodded their head in approval. Another family tradition completed.
I hope it's not too short. :)
Cool :D
The immortal forest -
I looked around aimlessly, scared of what was to become of me.
Why am I here? Why was I so carelessly stupid?
Every breath slowed me down. I ran, and ran, and ran, but the narrow, darkened forest seemed to wind on forever.
I couldn't carry on, I just couldn't. Running was no longer an option - hiding was the only thing left. Hiding until dawn seemed like a challenge, but I could no longer run. I just couldn't.
I found a narrow - yet somewhat slimy - opening. But it was probably no use, they had my scent. They had tasted my blood, both of them. My life was going to end. I knew it.
''Oh, dear hip-hop-girl123.'' chuckled the female one. Her pale skin shone in the bright moonlight.
A tear trickled down my cheek. And another. And another.
''We have your scent, fool.'' said the male. ''You don't possibly think you can hide from us?
The rocks started to move above me. Millions, (or so it seemed), of spiders scattered across the vast land of soil. I needed to go. Run. But my legs just wouldn’t budge.
But I did. I tried, at least. I panted and panted, knowing that every step would not possibly win my battle, but I carried on.
A rustle in the bushes caught my attention. It was the worst time to be curious, but I approached it. To my surprise, bats came shooting out, getting tangled in my locks. I collapsed of exhaustion.
Let us introduce ourselves,'' said the male.
''I'm emorox4eva, and this here is my partner, John_2_el_mejor, and you seem rather appetizing to us...''
A flash. A scream. An unnatural thirst for blood.
That was all it took for me to begin to embrace immortality.
[P.S. Sorry for making you guys partners xD
P.P.S, The title is kinda weird :/]
I will start :
It was a cold night and everyone was at home but on girl was all alone is the street she was Filipinhamaria she was there doing something nobody understand what she was doing so late on the street everyone was watching her from the windows and all litlle boys and girls were scared.
One girl came to the street to see if she was allright she went to see her and at the same time that girl Emoroz4eva touch filipa both of the scream and sayed Happy Halloween. So it was all to scare peoples everyone started to smile.
Here is my story!!
buttercup_100 , Colleenp87 and Emorox4eva was trick or treating.
It was 11 pm at night. the girls still hadn;t gone home yet. they stopped trick or treating 2 hours ago. they were just wandering around. then they saw a big fake vampire halloween deceration on the groun.d they went up to it.they decided since nobody was near it or they think nobody owned it , they would rip it. so they ripped it.
Then Emorox4eva phone got a text measage. she took her phone out and read the text measage aloud.
''It says ,'' said Emorox4eva , '' You will regret ripping me apart stupid girls!!'' ''thats sooo weird isn't it?? Who is it from??'' asked buttercup_100.
No-one. the number is blank.''
Then a gust of wind blew. the girl's hair whipped around their faces.
A man appeared and said ,'' You will regret destroying my master!!!!You will Pay for what you did!!'' He drew out a sword and said , '' This will be most enjoyable.''
The girls ran scream , with the man on their tail. Colleenp87 shouted to the man while running , ''What master!!! all we did was tear a decoration! You are crazy!!''
The man catched up on the girls and grabbed buttercup_100 and put his sword to her neck and said , '' bring my master back or the girl gets it!!''
Colleenp87 said , '' we cant bring him back!!let her go!!!!''
''Go guys! Go on!! run away!! I'll be ok!Go! I will never forgive myself if u dont! He will kill you too if you dont go!! SO GO!!!!''
Colleenp87 and Emorox4eva ran like Buttercup_100 asked them too. Buttercup_100 also told them to hide behind so they dont see her get killed.
The man said ,''Great. You stop your from seeing your pain. Good.''
'' Well , not anymore.'' Buttercup_100 punched the man in the face and kicked him in the shins and shouted to the girls , '' RUN!! LETS GO!! RUN THROUGH THE WOODS TO MY HOUSE!''
The girls ran through the woods running s fast as lighting.
They finnally got to buttercup_100's house and ran it and slammed the door. '' Wow!'' they all said. tHAT WAS quiet the night!
By buttercup_100
(Un named)
emorox4eva could feel the small, tiny droplets of rain on her forehead. She felt the breeze flowing through long locks of ebony black hair. She was aware her makeup was running slowly dow her cheeks, or was it tears? She didn't care. She didn't care about anything anymore. She strolled mindlessly into the disused dancing studio. Peering into the mirrors, she wiped dust away from the mirror glass and stared at her chocolate brown eyes, glistening in the dim studio lights. She hated looking at herself, it only reminded her of Fiona (fifibannana). It was as if she were never gone, but she was. Losing your twin, someone so close to you, who shared your life, felt like someone ripped your heart in two.
Skimming her snow white colored hand over the ballet bar, she felt uncertain about her feelings. Were she feeling lonesome? Angry? Depressed? She didn't know. All the knew was she was not going back, she had to be alone, apart from the world. All of a quick sudden, she saw out of the corner of her eye a small girl, the same size as her. The same... everything as her.
'F-fiona?' Jenna's shakey voice said, fear clearly in her fragile voice.
'It wasn't supposed to happen. Not here. Not now.'
'I... don't understand?'
The dark.
The next day, a dead body is found in the ballet studio. No harm had been done to her... not visible harm.
Hidden by the last clothes that were on her back, was the scars. A broken heart was inked on her bony back, in, blood? Beneath the sign was a message. It was Jenna's last words.
The message read:
Next time you look, look closer.
9 months later the ballet studio was to be torn down. The day is was to be knocked down, a teenage girl, named Ewonline threw a small pebble against the glass. A crack appeared and few shards of glass fell to the cold floor. She strolled forward and picked up one piece and held it to the light. And for that one second, just a small moment, she swore the saw something, she couldn't quite make it out. It was an eye. A chocolate brown eye, it looked sad. No, it was anger....
The end!
Fiona.
fifibannana
x
OMG I forgot to write my title xD
The name is
Just Another Family Tradition
I waited patiently for Jenna to come back from the kitchen. We were just about to watch a movie.. My phone beeped and I glanced at it. Just some more chainmail I thought, but I read through it anyway.
"I know how people hate chainmail but this actually will happen if you don't forward this!
One night, last year a girl was at a disco and she went upstairs to get a glass of water. When she came back up to the party everyone was playing "Truth or Dare" One person chose truth and the question asked was "Who do you hate?" The girl said Sarah. Sarah was standing in the doorway. The lights went out and there was a blood curdling shriek. The next day the headline in the newspaper was that at a party a crazed teen had murdered the whole party and then killed herself. Send this on or else she will come for you!"
I laughed. I never sent on these texts.
I heard a soft knock...
"Jenna? Is that you?"
A croaking noise came from beyond the door and I shuddered.
"Stop messing Jenna, and come in here!"
I laughed nervously. It WAS Jenna beyond the door playing some stupid trick on me.....wasn't it?
The door knob started to slowly turn and my heart started to beat faster.....then the lights flickered. I let a startled cry. What was happening?!
I started to back away from the door and stumbled over a chair. I fell awkwardly on my ankle and a hiss of pain escaped between my tight shut lips. Once again the lights flickered. I whimpered.
Finally the door opened and I saw Jenna backing into the room holding something in her hand. I could just see her hair flopping on her shoulder in the darkness of the room.
"Very funny Jenna. Ha ha. Now turn the lights back on. What have you got in your hands?"
Slowly she turned and I saw a glint of steel cradled in her arms. The I looked at her face and let out a blood curdling scream. Her face was ravaged with scars and blood was seeping from fresh gashes. Her red eyes focused on me and she started to slowly approach. I tried to scramble backwards but I couldn't move my ankle. Then her face was inches from mine and the lights went out................
It was a cold morning. Looked like it was raining. She woke up in a forest next to a huge pine tree. She didnt see much because of the fog. She was shocked to see a main street near by. Was it there before? She didnt know. Only one way to find out - ask the mysterious man a few steps away, maybe he knew whats going on.. She went to the man and asked -Whats happening? Whats with the street? I didnt notice it there before... Do you know whats going on??-
The man didnt even look at her. He just moved a little closer to her but she stepped back. He started smiling - Yeah. So what if i know? What good will that be? -
She was .... scared.... she tried to see if there were any other people or cars around but no luck.. The man was impatient - Well? Arent you gonna run away and scream in fear?-
She didnt understand until he took his coat off...
He took his hat off too and told her - Thats how i look like when i have no clothes on.-
She ran away and thought "SO MUCH FUR!!!....."
The man whispered to himself - Yeah, thats what i thought.-
She didnt look back and she started running even faster. After a while, she realized that shes running on 4 feet. Somehow, there was a mirror hanging on a brick wall in the middle of the forest. She saw a huge, furry animal. She jumped back in fear and she saw the animal jump back too.
"Am i this animal?? How did this happen? Why am i in this forest?"
Then she heard someone say -Dont worry, it wont attack you.-
She looked around but she didnt see anyone. When she turned back where the wall was supposed to be, it wasnt there anymore.
She was so afraid of....of...... of something..... she ran into the huge cloud of fog and realized she was falling. She fell through a gray cloud of fog.. When she was falling, she looked at her hands-paws. They looked like bear paws but the fur was more like a fox... She didnt hit the ground, she landed softly on her 4 paws. When she heard another voice, she was terrified. It said - Wake up!-
And she woke up in her bed in a sunny morning. Then she heard her sisters voice and now she understood - WAKE UP ALREADY!-
She understood that it was just a dream.
Lol.. im Katashira2 ^^
Ok. Mine's a story, but I got creative and wrote it in POEM form:
As Jenna walked,
Through the hall,
Searching for,
Her little doll.
Quite feet,
On the ground,
I just hope,
She will be found.
She started to cry,
Rolling down her cheeks were tears,
Helping wipe away,
All her fears.
There Jenna lied,
On the floor,
Looking at,
The open door.
As she enter,
She held her breath,
Almost if,
She had nothing left.
She looked around,
Nothing was there,
Just a lock,
Of her doll’s hair.
She picked it up,
Heard foot-steps,
Looked back,
Saw a man taking deep breaths.
Jenna heard,
Quite a scream,
Why wouldn’t she?
It is Halloween.
MY ENTRY:
A long time ago, there was a girl named Jenna. She had always wanted to be an artist. Once she was 18 years old, she decided to make it happen. She bought penciles and paper. She got ready to start at home. She looked away from the paper (for she was looking at it)to get a pencil. When she looked at the paper, a picture was there. It was GORGEOUS. The best drawing ever. It was odd, because she was looking at the paper the whole time, didn't pick up a pencil once, and looked away for only one minute. By the look of it, it should have taken 6 hours to make. She didn't understand. But in fact, that was the first drawing she'd ever sold, for more than $1,000. It went on and on. New peice of paper, same pencil, new STUNNING picture. By the age of 19, Jenna was a millionaire. One night, she woke up. She looked around. There were pictures everywhere, each with a threat on it. All about death. She decided to start to tear them down. When she tore the first one off, which was a VERY DETAILED picture of a person, was a hole in the wall. She reached in, and felt something that felt like.. Like skin.. She pulled it out. Then, she shrieked a terrifying scream. And fell to the floor. The exact same thing happened to the people that bought the drawings. So what was the cause of these deaths of the people that bought the drawings, and the death of the "artist?"
Well, that's what we're trying to find out still.
A Little Girl Named BlueGreen86, Got An Adorable China Doll For Her Halloween. She Called Her Precious EmoRox4Eva. Bluegreen86 Was Playing With Her Doll Until Her Mother Told Her To Put The Doll Away And Get To Bed, So Bluegreen86 Done What She Was Told, As She Put The Doll In Her Toybox Which Was In Her Playroom, She Said "Must Dash, It`s Late - My Bedtime".
As The Night Went On Little Bluegreen86 Heard Voices From Outside Her Bedroom, As She Jumped Down From Bed And Switched On Her Nightlight The Voice Dissapeared. She Thought It Was Her Imagination. So She Climbed Back Up To Bed And Turned The Light Off She Began To Heard The Voices Once Again - By This Time She Knew She Wasn`t Hearing Things. As She Thought What To Do Next She Yelled On Her Parents. They Came Rushing By Her Side Within Minutes. She Then Asked Them If They Seen Anyone In The Hallway Or If They Even Heard The Voice, But They Replied "Who?... What Voice?!".
It Was 3am And By This Time Bluegreen86 Was Between Her Parents In Their Bed As She Was To Scared To Sleep By Herself. She Was Woke Up By The Voice And This Time She Listened As It Said "Beware, Beware. As I`m Here To Scare!". She Began To Get More Frightend So She Through Herself Down On The Bed And Placed A Pillow Over Head. When The Voice Dissapeared She Removed The Pillow From Over Head And Seen Her Precious Little EmoRox4Eva Holding Her Parents Heads And The Bed Was Covered In Blood!
Rab92.
(That`s The Best I Can Think Of Just Now Lol).
The revenge of the underdog
By BabyDoll980
The silver knife felt cold against emorox4eva's neck. She was petrified, more scared than she had ever been in her life as she watched in fear as the blade came closer and closer...
"Why are you doing this to me?" she asked the hooded stranger, in hushed tones. She took a shaky breath and exhaled slowly. "Oh my dear Emorox4eva, if you had only stopped writing for the blog like I ordered you to, I wouldn't have to do this" drawled the stranger. It was a female, Emorox4eva could tell by the voice. It sounded familiar but she couldn't quite place it...
"Over the blog?'This is what it's about?" emorox4eva asked angrily. The stranger chuckled. "My dear, if you were not the reigning queen of stardoll, I would be. Your blog simply added to your fame... Say goodbye..."
Her screams pierced the silent night. Her dark red blood spilled onto the ground. Emorox4eva's pale body lay on the the ground with a bloody knife next to her. The stranger picked up her knife and pocketed it. Her hood fell of. Colleenp87 whispered sarcastically to herself, "Oh no, poor Emorox4eva. Looks like I'll have to be the fashionista of stardoll now... " Colleenp87 laughed, a crazy glint in her eye as she leapt into the cold night....
note from author: sorry if this story offends anyone. it isn't intentional!
IT WAS HALLOWEEN AND ME AND MY FRIENDS WENT TO NEW YORK. THERE LIVED OUR FRIEND JENNA BUT WE DIDN'T MEET HER 10 YEARS AGO. EVERYONE WAS HAPPY TO CELEBRATE HALLOWEEN. I'LL TELL YOU ABOUT BEST -MASCARETED GIRL. IT WAS MY FRIEND, JENNA. HER MASK WAS SO REAL! SCARY BUT AT THE SAME TIME BEAUTIFUL. HER EYES WAS ALWAYS HALF-OPEND. ALSO, SHE DIDN'T SAID WORD WHEN WE MET HER. IT WAS LITTLE WEIRD.
WE ASKED HER WHAT'S MATTER, AND SHE DIDN'T ANSWER. SHE JUST RUNNED INTO HER BATHROOM. WE SPYED HER THROUGH KEYHOLE. BUT NOTHING SPECIAL. SHE WASHED HER MAKEUP. THEN WE GET INTO HER ROOM AND WAITING HER...THEN SHE CAME AFTER SOME SECONDS AND SHE STILL WAS WITH MAKEUP AND SPOOKY CLOTHES. WE ASKED HER HOW SHE WASHED HER MAKEUP AND GOT IT BACK SO FAST. THEN SHE CLOSED EYES. WITH LIGHT-SPEED SHE OPEND IT AND THEY WAS BLOODY-RED! WE STARTED RUNNING AND SHE APPEARED IN FRONT OF US AND THEN SHE DISSAPEARED. WE FOUND OUT SHE SHE IS DAUGHTER OF DRACULA WHO IS DAILY BAT AND AT THE NIGHT HE IS VAMPIRE. NEXT DAY WE BOUGHT NEWSPAPERS AT TRAFIC AND WE SAW BIG TITLE: GHOST GIRL WALKING NEW YORK STREETS. OMG, SHE WAS GHOST!!! WE DIDN'T EVEN KNEW IT HOW SHE BECAME GHOST? ALSO, HER DAD WAS ALWAYS FRIENDLY AND FUNNY, HOW HE BECAME BAT? I MEAN, VAMPIRE? WE THOUGHT THAT IS SOMETHING HAPPEND WITH THEIR LIFES, SOMETHING REALLY BAD BUT WE DIDN'T EVER FOUND OUT...
BY: KlaudiaRossoFan
Lost in the Awoken
I was awoken. The sound I heard opened my eyes. I breathed in and out. "Jenna?" I whispered trying not to disturb everyone else that was asleep.
Jenna flicked her eyes open slowly and sat up in her sleeping bag. "Where is your flash light?" I said in a casual voice, even though I was deeply scared. Jenna extended her arm handing me her flashlight and then fell asleep again.
I got up and started walking around my house searching for the reason for that noise.
I walked past the bathroom and inhaled the scent of wild roses. The smell tingled my nose.
The smell got stronger and stronger.
I suddenly turned around to sound of crying but saw nothing. I wanted to walk back to the party but I knew I had to walk on.
I blinked my eyes open to a mirror, as the light from the flashlight reflected in my eyes. I looked at the moving picture of the girl in the glass and slowly, she turned into someone I did not know. I was unable to un-identify her. "Bloody Mary," I mumbled. I walked on with watery eyes. It always happened to me when I thought of ghosts.
I entered my bedroom and saw my laptop open. I ignored it and investigated my room. I opened my wardrobe and then I saw a woman hanging, with blood stains on her clothes. She seemed to not have fingernails. I looked at her face. It was the woman I saw in the mirror. Her eyes were not a normal color, but in-fact they were pink.
I closed the door and felt a light on me. My laptop was on.
On the screen was Emorox4eva's Stardoll suite. "Jenna!" I gasped.
Voices in my head screamed over and over again; "Go back!"
I ran as fast as I could to the living room, where the slumber party was being held and there was everyone motionless. A hand grabbed my ankle and tried to pull me under the rug i was only a meter away from. I screamed and then felt something sharp drop into my spine. I yanked it out and then there was no light, no friends, no life.
I was falling, continuously, I could never stop falling.
"Death Lake-'Fun' isn't always what you think it is."
John & Jenna were twins who lived in the small town of Lakesville. As twins, they did everything together, sports, homework and even drama club. The only thing that was different between the two was John's lack of common sense and Jenna's cautiousness.
October 31, 1989...Halloween.
As the two were heading out the door for school John found an old newspaper from his Dad's collection.
"Death Lake, Myth or Reality?" He read..."Cool!"
The next day John had completely forgotten about his costume he was going to wear later that night as he was too busy getting information about Death Lake.
"....Hey, John, what are you doing?"
"I found this article in one of dad's newspaper bunches about this place called 'Death Lake'"
"Wow, awesome." She replied sarcastically.
As Jenna was off to get ready for the big night she had ahead of her, something John said caught her attention.
"It's said to be haunted. Every night at Halloween the curse is refreshed and..." He uttered.
"Cursed? Seriously, you believe that!? It's the stupidest thing ever!" Jenna replied with deep laughter,trying to act cool.
"Oh really? You're not afraid?"
"Of course not!"
"Fine, let's go...you, me tonight!" John said knowing Jenna was way to scared.
"To..to..tonight?!?!...uhh but what about trick or treating?" The fear was clearly heard through her voice.
"CHICKEN! YOU SHOULD GO AS A CHICKEN TONIGHT AND NOT AN ANGEL!" John repeatedly taunted her!
"Let's go...since you're not afraid!"
"FINE! I'm scared! You know this stuff creeps me out!" Jenna shouted!
"Come on let's just do it! You said it yourself, it's just a myth!"
"Fine, I'm gonna go call go call Lilla and let her know where we're going"
As the night grew longer John began getting more impatient! He really wanted to go check out Death Lake, but Jenna was stalling..she was too busy blogging with Lilla.
"LET'S GO!, BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE, YOU'RE BLOG COULD WAIT! STOP PROCRASTINATING!"
"Alright..Jeez I'm done! Come on, Lilla"
The trio walked for half an hour. The whole time Jenna was saying how much she thought this was a bad idea, but of course, John Disagreed. Lilla really didn't know what was going on.
"We're here!! Wohoo!!" John said with excitement!!
"Yeah...let's go now..."
"No way!...this is way cool...and besides nothing's happening!" He said trying to calm her down.
As the two continued their argument Lilla ran off to get a better view of the lake.
"LILLA GET BACK HERE!" Jenna shouted!
"Jenna calmed down! Nothing's happening..it's just fun!" Lilla said giggling...
"Wait...what's that!" Jenna said nearly in tears.
"It's nothing...I think" John said as he began to get worried..
"JOHN!!!!" Jenna shouted with all her might!
Lilla fell into the lake!
"HELP!!!" Lilla screamed!
"HELP!!!!"
"We're coming!!!...let's go!" John said rushing over to Lilla!
"I knew this place was no good I knew it!" Jenna claimed looking towards John...as if it was his fault.
They tugged and pulled and tried so hard to try and get Lilla out before she drowned, but then a big ray of purple light came shooting out of the water and nothing but big banging noises were being heard!
"JOHN!! OH MY GOD JOHN!!!" Jenna said crying her heart out!!
John too had been sucked into the purple cursed waters! Jenna eventually lost track of Lilla, and as she tried to grab Johns hand, sudden shocks would occur!
"GO JENNA!! GO!" John said as he wanted Jenna to save herself!
"NO WAY! I'M NOT LEAVING Y..."
Jenna couldn't even finish her words when the biggest tree came crashing towards her direction and split her and John apart. John uttered his final words...a soft, fainted, "I'm sorry.."
Jenna didn't remember much of that tragic event, when she finally got home and recovered all she knew was that she had lost her brother and best friend. To this day no one could explain what happened and most importantly why? Just as Lilla said...it's just 'Fun'.
THE END!
I hope you like it! It's 100% made by me, and I tried my best, scary isn't my best topic!
Thanks Jenna! xx Wow it sounds awkward. I'm gonna change some of the "John_2_el_mejor"s to "John"s and repost.
I’m sitting alone, yes, alone. I’m hoping my friend will come to my house in a minute.
“Ring! Ring! Ring!”
The phone’s ringing, I ran to the phone. “Jenna calls me! Yay!” That’s what I thought.
I answer it excitingly.
“Jenna! Finally”
“Shh”
“J-J-Jenna? Is that you?”
”Shhhhhhh”
I ran into my room. Oh my God, that’s kinda scary. I saw what’s happening outside from my window. I saw many kids having fun “Trick or Treat”-ing. I’m jealous of them, honestly. Until now, nobody said “Happy Halloween” to me, even my parents, or maybe my bestie, Jenna. Aaaah, where are you, Jenna?!
“Knock, Knock, Knock, Knock, Knock”
I heard someone knock the door. I went to the living room. I shouted “Please Wait!”. Then it stopped. Weird, eh? I opened the door, nobody there. But then…..
“TRICK OR TREAT?????”
Jenna, with a witch look-a-like costume. Plus with the dark make-up.
“Aaaaaaaah! Oh my God! Aaaaah!”
“Calm down, Calm down, it’s me, Jenna. What happen?”
“Jenna!”
I pulled her arm quickly. I’m so scared. But phewww, at least I’m not alone.
“Uh, Amy, I need to go to the toilet. Wait ok”
“But… Jenn….”
“Shhh! Don’t tell me you’re scared. I’ll be back”
Oh, Jenna’s right, I’m not scared. “BZZT” Holy Moly! The lights went off! I shouted out loud. But I didn’t hear Jenna’s voice, at all.
I can’t see anything. I can’t hear Jenna’s voice. How come she is not screaming when the light went off? God, she’s such a brave girl.
I was searching for my phone or something, but I couldn’t find it. Suddenly I heard someone’s coming to the living room. I’m hiding.
“Amy? Are you there?”
“JENNA!!!!”
I jumped. I ran to her and hugged her like crazy. We’re sitting together, in a very dark living room. Oh wait, there’s a little light.
“Tick Tick Tick”
Someone played with it. Like on-off-on-off-on-off, and there’s a little creepy sound from nowhere. Many weird things happened. But at least I’m with Jenna, she’s very brave. We went to the kitchen together. What? I remember there are some cakes on the table, but now it’s gone.
Yes, gone.
We looked into the bathroom.
“Happy Halloween”
“AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!”
It was nearly 10:30 PM, bluegreen86 heard a strange noise coming from emorox4eva apartment, and she thought that her friend was prepairing herself for halloween.
After that john_2_el_mejor called bluegreen86 if she was going to his party for halloween. She was so happy for being invited and she said yes and as her 2 bffs emorox4eva and filipinhamaria he asked ehr if they all could come with the same car becase so many peopel would be at the party and there was not enough parking space for all and with her happines she said that she would as the girls and she went to emorox4eva appartment when the door was opened and she entered asking: Jenna are u there?
There was no answer but just a strange noise coming form the bathroom, she entered there and she found filipinhamaria tied up.
Bluegreen86 untied her and she asked that who did her and the answer was: An old creepy man with a pumnkin in place of his head.
She was so scared and she asked for emorox4eva and she leared that the stragneman gottet emorox4eva and went to john_2_el_mejor house to kill all and only she could save them using the power she had that she was born on 31st of october.
They went in the car and drived to john-2_el_mejor house and they saw there was no lights at all but only soem noises like here they came or thins like that.
She was so scard when in 5 second all light were on and all were saying hapybday bluegreen86.
She felt so happy for this big superise form ehr friends and then she saw emorox4eva and john_2_el_mejor and said: U guys are the best and togerther wuth the Hb.Bazzar had a group hug.
This was my story and is not creepy but is shows the spirit of halloween.
On Stardoll i am Miss_LolitaF
Inhaled Love x
It Burns Rapidily. As I watch, it soars over me, gulping me in. I stop breathing but feel relief ."I can stop now, the fight is over" I tell myself. "Jenna, stop you dont need to do this". I hear his voice,turn around. I know it's too late, the demon in me has decided, it's chanting to me. "Be Dead,Be Dead".
I look at john he's all I have, all that is worth living for. But I'm useless, no-one loves me, no-one cares. I start to cough, uncontrollably, I'm choking now. John runs to me but I push him off. He grabs me and...
What have I done.He loved me , I loved him. I am so freaking selfish if I just listened, walked away, started fresh. Then he would not have found me by that fire, but maybe by his side. Its too late he's gone what chance have I got?
I am getting a sick pleasure from inhaling the smoke, his ashes travelling through me. I dont feel suffering, I feel concentrated pain. Why bother, maybe I'll end up will him. After all halloween is when they come out, isn't it?
(cherrysugar10)
By Megan
Emorox4eva was shuffling silently along a long, cobblestoned-paved road, rushing to get home before dawn set across the still yet ominous town.
Her distant dark-brown eyes scanned the dim-lit street for the quickest way to get back to her apartment. Then, suddenly, a lone dog howl made her quicken her pace to a jog, disquieting her.
She heard him before he was upon her. A rustle of branches, deep signs accompanying awkward pauses. The dark shadow leapt from the foliage, arms outstretched, yearning to catch her. Emorox4eva tried to depart, sprinting for a clearing, her heart racing and a scream held in her throat. But there he was, already in front of her, chuckling to himself.
Oops I forgot to mention my name on stardoll[:
It is adjaja.
Oh my, I suck at writing stories, especially scary ones, so I`ll pass on this one. :]
Good luck to everyone who participates though!
Would I be allowed to write a pretty scary one without a happy ending?
“More that 1000 million years ago, on a windy, outspoken day. Lived an infinitesimal and rural cottage, where the poor peasant girl lived. Her name was, emorox4eva, and many embarked on her name. “Emo” most muttered, and so emorox4eva was cursed with those calls. Each day and night she would awake to a dim and depressing day. Honest in her work, she would gather the sheep and cattle. But little did she know the gloomy future that lay ahead. One day, two nights before Halloween there was a sudden storm, in which emorox4eva’s father, and mother died. Her tears like poison ivy grieved a thirst. Not a thirst for water though, a thirst for blood and revenge upon everyone. She unleashed a spell-for witchery was in her blood and a diamond-jeweled red ring was released into the sand.”
MissCunha read to her students in primary school.
“I don’t suppose it was true” ewonline said to misscunha. “Absolutely positively not” she replied. And with that ewonline went off into the suburban city ready to celebrate Halloween. Though, it was peculiar to note that ewonline spotted the exact ring near her apartment floor. She picked it up and put it on, unaware of its power and signed with grief as she hurried upstairs to show her mother. Though, there was no mother, nor father. She was alone on that day, on that windy, outspoken day.
She knew something was wrong when her computer immediately turned on and searched up the name emorox4eva. 20 results popped out, ewonline’s name was sighted on all of these searches. “But it couldn’t be” she said to herself. “Yes it could”. Emorox4eva had come from beyond the graves had just replied. This is the part I kill you, my dear.
A sudden moment. EMONLINE WAS GONE. No one knew why she had disappeared, but the ring still lived on-to ewonline’s dear mother. But if you ever did manage to find the same ring, jeweled red make shore to dispose of it. Or EMOROX4EVA will get you.
P.s my username is girlworld_club
Thanks for reading.
Shocker!
By clodaghmac
One dark, spooking Halloween night, Jenna (aka emorox4eva) was on her computer, surfing through all the stories posted to her from Stardoll members. They were for the comp her blog, Stardoll’s Most Wanted, was having, where they must write a scary Halloween story. As she shifted through each one, she started to get more and more desperate. Each one was worse than the other. They were all either about monsters, or vampires, or witches or ghosts. There was nothing even remotely original. Some stories were just copy and pasted from the internet, some even has links still at the bottom!
She thought she’d never find a winner, until she finally came across one. She became hooked on the story instantly. She couldn’t tear her eyes away from it! She just kept reading, she couldn’t stop! She definitely has a winner, no second thought! She quickly signed into Stardoll. She clicked Buy to get the prize for her winner, but the page was very slow to come up. That didn’t make much sense, since her Internet was working perfectly just a few minutes ago. She refreshed to page, but it was still very slow.
Finally, after almost half an hour, the page flashed on. What she saw then made her scream. It wasn’t the usually page, it was different. It was all black, and the only thing that was on the screen was bold, white letters, flashing. They read,
“JENNA, YOU CAN NO LONGER BUY STARDOLLARS! YOU HAVE BOGHT FAR TOO MANY ALREADY! YOU ARE BEING BANNED FROM BUYING STARDOLLARS FROM NOW ONE! –CALLIE.STARDOLL”
Jenna couldn’t believe her eyes. This wasn’t happening! Stardoll wouldn’t do that. It didn’t make sense! She quickly mailed on of her good Stardoll friends, Mel (aka bluegreen86), to tell her what was happening, but when she tried to send the message, the screen went black once again and the bold, white letters flashed
“JENNA! YOU HAVE SENT FAR TOO MANY MAILS! YOU ARE BANNED FROM SENDING MAILS FROM NOW ON! –CALLIE.STARDOLL”
Jenna was confused. What was going on? This was unbelievable!
All of a sudden, her whole screen went black and the white letters flashed!
“GET OFF THE COMPUTER!” Boomed a voice, seemingly COMING from her computer! “GET OFF NOW!”
A gust of wind rushed into the house, and the lights started to flicker, the windows opened and closed violently and the computer flashed a million different colours and images! Jenna began to scream, but the whole house started to shake and thunder roared and lighting struck all around her. She was crying now, tear soaking her face. “I JUST WANTED TO BUY STARDOLLARS!” She yelled at the top of her lungs
Just like that, everything stopped. Jenna woke to find herself in her bed. She sat bolt upright quickly, making her feel dizzy for a moment. When she was right, she looked around. It was so dark she could barely make out the clock on the wall. 12:00 am, 1st November it read. She looked at it stunned. Was that all a dream? All a stupid, dopey dream that didn’t even make sense? She ran to the computer and turned it on. Her dressing room on Stardoll flashed up, noting changed. She looked at it, amazed. She laughed. Just a dream, she told herself. Just a stupid…
All of a sudden, the screen went black again, and bold, white letters flashed in front of her.
“HAPPY HALLOWEEN” It read, and somewhere in the distance she heard a scream
Humming.
It was the night before halloween.Filipinhamaria and Emorox4eva we're decorating Emorox4eva's house.Filipinhamaria said she's going inside for more decorations.Emorox4eva was on a ladder, decorating the roof with lights.And suddenly a loud scream,from inside the house, made Emorox4eva fall from the ladder.She bumbed her head, and she started to bleed.She ignored it and run inside to see what happend.Strange humming was all around Emorox4eva, and when she got to the kitchen door the humming got louder.She started shaking and her hand was slowly reaching for the doorknob, when the humming started to get silent.She opened the door slowly..
she almost fainted when she saw a blood trail going trough the backdoor.Emorox4eva grabbed a broom and slowly went to the backdoor.She saw filiphinmaria lying on the grass bloody,shaking and gasping for air.Emorox4eva was frozen, her eyes locked on filiphinmaria.The broom fell on the grass.Filiphinmaria turned her head and weakly said - Run!
And when she said that, the humming started behind emorox4eva.It was like wind, and it blew behind emorox4eva, and made her fall.She didn't look back, she just started to move towards filiphinmaria.She didn't know what to do, she just stared at her face, when her eyes began to stare behing emorox4eva with shock, and fear.Emorox4eva moved slowly to look what was behing her.She saw a big and terrifing...
BOOM!
Auch! Emorox4eva said, when she fell on the floor from her bed.It was all a horrible dream she thought with ease..
She went to the kitchen, for breakfast, still very sleepy.She grabed a bowl for cereal when she froze...the bowl fell on the floor and smashed in to tiny pieces.She saw a blood trail going trough the backdoor...
The end...
or is it?
It started with little things, strange incidents that were sometimes inconvenient, sometimes almost amusing. But then the heavy trouble began... and the terror.
In the early 1970s, two sisters, Lois Dean and Diantha Summer, moved their families into two old houses in the middle of Rawlins, Wyoming, a small city in the Rocky Mountains. Lois and her husband and their six children moved into the big house. Diantha and her two sons took the carriage house right behind the main house.
Very soon, strange things began to happen in the big house:
Lights kept turning on and off. At first the adults thought it was just the kids playing around. But they soon found that the lights seemed to be going on and off by themselves, even when no one else was around. Thinking it must be an electrical problem, Lois and her husband had the house rewired, but it kept happening.
When the children were playing games, they would leave the room for a minute and then come back to find game pieces missing.
An older daughter found the colors in her makeup kits often smeared together. At first she thought the younger children were doing it, so she banished them from her room. But it kept happening even after she padlocked the door.
The family dog wagged his tail as though at an invisible guest, and his eyes followed something across the room.
Sometimes, in the big house the bathroom cabinet would be found completely empty. Toothbrushes, combs and medicines would all be gone, to be found later in odd places. Again, Lois thought it was the children, but it even happened when they were all at school and she was alone in the house.
Then things began to get rough.
A boyfriend of one of the girls was playfully climbing through a window. Something unseen picked him up and threw him inside, against a wall. That was the end of that boyfriend. He never came back for another visit.
Not long afterward, one of the younger boys said he had seen something in the garage. Mike, Diantha's 14-year old, decided to take a look. He started out the back door of the big house and suddenly felt two hands grab him and throw him through the air, back into the kitchen, into the refrigerator. He had red marks on his chest as if something had scratched him.
Lois was infuriated. She began yelling, "I don't care who you are. I'm not putting up with you coming into my house and hurting kids!"
She was so angry that she was momentarily unafraid. She dashed out into the garage. There she saw a black shape.
"It was big and billowy," she says, "and it was dressed like a woman in something black and long."
It came toward her smoothly, as though it were on wheels...
"Something black and cold started coming out of it, like ribbons," she recalls. "It started wrapping me in those strands. I could feel their coldness. I couldn't move."
The she felt her sister, who saw the shape too, grab her from behind and jerk her away from the thing and back into the big house.
The sisters sat up all night, praying as hard as they could. The prayers may have had a good effect, for they never saw the thing again.
They took to calling that incident "the Main Event". Afterward, they felt the atmosphere to be a little less oppressive. However, everyone had a sense that the place was still not quite right, and before long, both families moved out.
In talking to the neighbors, only one event in the past seemed to hold a clue. Back in the early 1900s, a graveyard on the property was dug up and moved to another location. Rumor had it that two bodies were left behind. Were these two different restless spirits? We may never know.
Bonekinha03 in Stardoll ( sorry i dint used ppl in stardoll...because i alredy did a comp like this and i used the owner and she gotted mad, and she blocked me and stuff...sorry, can i still participate?)
Shopaholic
One day bluegreen86 went shopping with Nicole(me) and Jessica. Bluegreen86 would do whatever means to buy something even skipping school and dinner.Nicole and Jessica told her its a addiction she wouldn't listen until that one night,Halloween Night for her that was the best day to shop the most sales and stuff.She didn't really need them but didn't really care she just wanted to show off.So the three meanest girls in school came that day and wanted to buy a costume and the most beautiful ones were there.Bluegreen86 got it first the 3 costumes when not really needed.The other girls said "Is that how you want to be, greedy ok we will show you what Halloween really means" the girls put a spell on her she said "I don't care do your worst" they got even mader so she got the curse.The next day bluegreen86's dad lost his job,but her mom only barely earns money so she couldn't shop anymore.Two weeks later her mom died.Her friends didn't want to be her friend anymore.So she cried everyday and they lost everything even the house,except bluegreen86 clothes and stuff she refused to sell them so then her dad died and it was only her.Her family members didn't want to help her so she found a pumpkin and cut her head off and replace it with a pumpkin and every halloween night bluegreen86 comes out and says"I AM THE SHOPAHOLIC PUMPKIN QUEEN"Till this day if you don't share your stuff she will hunt you down until your last breathe.
So share with people not just yourself just like Jenna always give money and codes thats so nice.
(Not a true story)
I HOPE U LIKE MINES EBCASE I WORKED HARD ON IT
44nicole44.blogspot.com ,
That is my entery ! x
Chapter 1 : The Cemetery .
It was a Cold , Dusty Halloween Night when two girl's called Nicole and Flipa were Out In the Cemetery . They allway's went to the Cemetery on Halloween , To Give themselves a Scare ! Nicole had dressed up as a Evil Which , and Flipa was a Evil Princess !In the Cemetery it was allway's dark with a Dim Light beside a door , which they wondered was inside ! They were standing by the Grave's when Nicole Said ' I wonder what is Behind that door ' , nudging Flipa .
' Maby a Scary Ghost , or ... or ehh some Bone's ! Said Flipa when it brought the two girl's to think relay hard . ' Why don't we go , and try to open the door ! ' said Flipa running over to the Window on the wall .'Nicole ran over and gave a hard tug at the door ' It wont Budge ! ' . 'Ohhhhhhh !' .
' AHH , what was that ! 'the two Screamed ! They Both Looked inside the Window , Looking to be surprised at anything , Then Suddenly ........ The Door Opened .
Chapter 2 : Inside the Door .
The Girl's walked inside when suddenly the door slammed Shut . it was pitch black , but in Nicole's small bag she had a Small Flash Light , so she took it out and switched it on . ' AHH ! ' said Nicole . ' What is it ? ' replied Flipa . ' Its a SPIDER ! ' ' It's all right it wont do any harm ' said flipa and walked over and picked the small spider up . This was a Strange spider , because it have Orange all over it . While Flipa was Look at the spider , Nicole wondered around and looking at this old and dusty room . There was a Table and a Chair with some Notes . She walked over and shined her Light Onto the Notes , they weren't very clear to read since they would have been writer a While ago . When flipa noticed her over at the table she went to join her . ' I wonder what these letter's say , They are blunt out ' said Nicole . ' it say's in the top right hand corner , it was writen in 1969 ! 30 Year's ago ! ' replyed Flipa . ' This room Look's like a Office , it might have been the owner's shed where all his thing's were kepped . Let's Look for clue's ' . The two girl's looked for clue's around the room.'This bookcase look's very suspisious . Let's look at these book's ......
Chapter 3 : Just Another .
They Lifted the book's , looking careful when suddenly by lifting one of the book's the bookcase moved and their revealed a Hidden Door . There was a Code Key on the door , so the could not enter . ' get put of her now before bad thing's happen ' said a Voice .
' what was that ? ' Said Nicole scared like a Leaf .
' Out NOW !!! ' Screamed the voice , the door beside the window Opened , the two girl's ran for their life . When they reached the outside the door Closed with a Bang , Leaving the two girl's standing beside the tree with fright And Horror . ' what do you think that was , I want to go home ' said Flipa ,
' me two ' said Nicole ' I think we have had enough Halloween fun for tonight ! ' .So the both girl's ran out of the cemetery and walked down the outside path , Just wondering what one earth it could have been , Was it to do with the Orange Spider ?..........
Miss_LolitaF- I'm sure everyone worked hard. It just depends on who did the best. Good Luck.
Good luck everyone! :)
My story:
Midnight
One night, John_2_el_mejor invited hundreds of people to come to his mansion to celebrate the success of his new book. There was a strange woman there who he did not even know. John did not remember inviting her. Her name was Midnight, and she never talked much. After the party, she asked John if she could stay there because she lived very far, and it was getting late. Kind John agreed, and showed her to his guest room. The next day, Midnight refused to leave. John thought it was odd that she did not want to go home, but decided to let her stay one more night. The following day, Midnight still wouldn’t leave, and John was starting to think that Midnight was up to something.
He asked her, “Shouldn’t you be going home?” John_2_el_mejor paused for an answer, but Midnight said nothing. This continued for 3 months until December 31st, New Year’s Eve, the midnight of the year.
Midnight greeted John with a, “Happy New Year’s Eve!”
John_2_el_mejor replied, “A new year, a new home? Please?” Midnight ignored John’s reply. Later, at dinner, John complemented Midnight on the scrumptious meal that he ate. That night, John_2_el_mejor did not sleep well, but he did not know why. He had the strangest dream. He was cutting something… He thought he might be dreaming of cooking, but he did not know how to cook. Maybe the dream was teaching him how to cook! John had always wanted to learn how to cook, so he moved his hand and followed the directions in the dream.
Once John woke up on New Year’s Day, he checked his email. He had 835 new messages to check, but he only checked one that day. That one was from Midnight, who never wrote him emails, as he was in the house most of the time, and she could just go into his room to talk to him. He opened the email. The computer screen showed:
Thank you!
Midnight M. midnight1231@yahoo.com
Friday, December 31, 2007 12:00:00 PM
To: John_2_el_mejor@johnbooks.org
John,
I will be going now. Thank you for everything you did for me, including something you did to me...
-Midnight
After John read it, he was relieved that she was leaving; Midnight was really starting to bother him. Then, on the second time reading it, he noticed “12:00:00 PM” and “you did to me...” The time shocked him, why would Midnight send him an email while she was supposed to be sleeping? Why did Midnight send an email at midnight, the time of her name? When did John ever do anything special to Midnight? He was troubled for the rest of the day and couldn’t concentrate on the new book he was writing.
He called the police after a few hours of not successfully writing any part of his book, and told them about this strange incident. The police came and walked around the house and moved around John’s belongings. The moving around of things made John become extremely annoyed, so he rudely told the police to stop moving them around. The police left because of his rudeness.
John_2_el_mejor thought to himself, “I don’t need them to figure out what happened; I’ll do it myself.” With that thought in mind, he went searching for clues, but did not find any. He had searched all over the house, except for Midnight’s old room. John never thought of the obvious because as an author, he was always indirect when thinking about ideas. When John finally thought of looking in Midnight’s room, he went into the room and peered over at the bed. He saw Midnight. She was lying there, motionless.
This story was entirely[sorry about spelling]by me!
One night I went out Trick or Treating with my two friends emorox4eva and Beewei.
Why passed this house that no one ever went into.I thought it would be really cool if we went in.The house was so rundown that when ever you took a step forward the whole floor would move.I heard footsteps but I knew it was only emorox4eva messing around
I looked up and there was this amazing chandalier hanging from the roof.But what was hanging onto the side of it was emorox4eva.She was just hanging there blood dripping from her fingertips!
I knew she liked to have a laugh and go exploring but she would never go in here alone!
I knew her killer was still in the house. I ran as fast as I could home. I always blame myself for what happened to her!
The End!!!
Sleep tight.
By little.miss.28
Emorox4eva is Jenna in the story.
It was a dark and stormy night, the air was cold and the sky was dark. Jenna, a 13 year old girl, was lying in bed trying to fall asleep. Her eyes snapped open when she heard a sound coming from under her bed. She thought that if she kept her eyes closed then the sound would go away, but it just continued. She didn’t want to step out of bed because she was scared that something might grab her leg, so the only thing she could do was scream.
“Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh” Jenna screamed, her parents came rushing into the room.
“Honey, what’s wrong?” her mother was trying to settle her down so that she would stop screaming.
“Mum, I’m scared” she said trying to fight hiccups “I heard a sound” trying not to hiccup “there’s something in my room”
“no there’s not honey, try to get some sleep” Jenna’s parents walked out of the room, turned the light off and then closed the door.
Jenna was upset that her parents didn’t believe her, but there was nothing else she could do, so she tried to sleep. Suddenly, a huge shadowed formed above her, looking down at her like she was a little baby.
“mum, dad” is all she had the energy to yell before she went limp. The monster had reached into her stomach and had drained her body of everything. In the morning Jenna’s mum walked into the room to wake her up, but all that was left of her was the skin. Screaming and crying she called for Jenna’s father to come in.
“We didn’t listen and now she’s gone” said her father trying hard not to loose his breath.
After they had called the police her parents had to organize the funeral, all of her family and friends were there. Each of them had tears rolling down their faces. Three days after the funeral Jenna’s parents were found dead in their bed with only their skin left.
It is believed that Jenna’s family haunts that house now. No one lives there because of the horrible murders there.
The end.
xx Abz (little.miss.28)
1867
emorox4eva was a very respectd person in a little village. everybody had respect for her because she cames from a rich family and she was intelligence.
one day, it was winter, she went to her sister, she saw a very handsom guy who sold tabacco. he asked: do you want some tabacco? and she negate and prceeded but she turned around and bought some tabacco.
later at home, she returns from her sister, she smoked her tabacco and thought what a handsome guy...
as of now she saw this guy, his name was john2elmejor, every day. she loved he, and he loved she. they was a couple but everybody backbited about them cause she was high respectd and he was very disrespected...
but john2elmejor was young and she wanted to play and have his fun. so he was unfaithful to emorox4eva, so they argue. he baet she and she sickened... she died but before she died she gave him a letter and there stands that he doesnt might ever have another girl, otherwise his she will die.
he thought that was a joke but no...it wasnt...
his new girlfriends name was bluegreen86, she was a very cute and nice person. later they married and got a child her name was findourlove. one daay he got nightmare about emoroxforeva. she wanted to killing him but he was stronger so he could stragle her and she died. he waked up,brenched in sweat, and he saw his wife bluegreen dead, stregled... he stampeded without his daughter or anything else. he camed to another little village to beginn a new life. again he fell in love with ewoline. she looked beautiful and she was eloquent. but they doesint married. one day he got a nightmare again about emorox4eva and again he waked up brenched in sweat but nobody was died. but now he saw emorox4eva on the days, on the street, in bakeries and in makets. someday john2elmejor and ewoline made a promenade and he saw emorox4eva, she wanted to killing him but again he was stronger. he killed ewoline... with a rod. her blood was on his hands... and again he walked away... but now he was persecuted... the family and friends from ewoline and from bluegreen chased him. he jumped in a lake and... whats that? a hand grabbed his leg... blub blub... nobady saw him ever...
now he is with his true love emorox4eva...<3 happy end
My Halloween story:
It was a great party and everyone danced and had fun. At the end of the party there was a costume competition. 10 people were in the final round. They came on a small stage and the jury said their decision. They began with the 10th prize. It was during some time and my friend, Jenna, and me sat down and drunk something. But when they said who won we looked up. It was a very small person in a monster costume. “Now we want to see who you are in real”, said one of the jury members. Everyone took of the wizard, out of the small person who won. “Come on!”, shouted everyone. “We want to see your real face!”, but there was no reaction. Then, a person got on the stage and tried to get the wizard off. But it didn’t work. More people tried, but the wizard didn’t move. Some one really big, dressed as a pumpkin, also tried and-it worked. The wizard got off, but what was that under it? A lot of blood was there and some bones. The small person, was ist really a person?, screamed.
“That’s, no that isn’t, is it?”Tried my friend to say. But an other person was faster than me to answer my friend: ”Evacuate the house! It’s a real monster!” Lots of people wanted to run through the door at once. Some jumped out of the window. I didn’t want to stay either so anyway I got off there. Behind a window I hided because I wanted to see the reaction of the monster. It was alone now in the house. It sat down and began to cry. I felt sorry for the small monster. It hasn’t done something bad. So I went in there and sat down next to it. “Why are you so sad?”, I asked. Firstit didn’t say anything but then it began to speak: “Helloween is the day for monster, isn’t it? My family is so stupid and never celebrats something. So this day I wanted to have fun with you. But look arround, nobody wants to have fun with me.” While this, Jenna came in and listened to us. It was so sad to see this small thing crieing. “Let’s have our own party”, said she then. “I think you are really nice and I have never celebrated Helloween with a real monster.”
BLOOD, part one.
The wind was silent. The trees were making quiet sways from the wind. The leaves were dancing below me.
I couldn't run. I couldn't move. It's like I'm paralyzed.
I try to speak, but no words escape my mouth.
"So, here we are, once again," the raspy voice laughed. A hint of evil in his voice.
His blood shot eyes. His black cloak and black clothes. Blood stains on them.
I don't say anything.
"You know something Jenna, I could let you go, but then I'd be the stupid one," he laughed.
The laugh. That laugh was not an ordinary laugh. It was the laugh a crazy man.
"John.." I managed to say.
But what should I say? What would make him stop this? Nothing. Absolutely nothing.
"What?" He snapped.
I spoke again.
"Why.. why, are you doing this? Why.." My voice wasn't normal.
He gave me an evil glare.
" You. Killed. My. Wife. " He growled. He said each word separate.
That sentence was true. I had killed his wife. But his wife was trying to kill me, like he is now.
" I had too, she was trying to kill me!" I yelled.
I was getting more and more angrier.
He laughed, that evil laugh of his.
"Well then Jenna dear, maybe this will help you think of what you've done," He smirked.
And like that I was gone from the woods.
I was in a different place now.
The room was white, all the walls were white. Everything was white. There were white tulips on the floor. Hundreds of them.
I walked towards them. I picked one up, closed my eyes, and held the flower upto my nose. The flower had no scent. I opened my eyes and on the tulip was blood dripping on the floor.
I screamed and threw it. I looked around at the walls and the floor.
Blood.
Blood was everywhere.
Crimson red.
I looked around and I saw something in the corner of my eye. I turned.
More scream came out of my mouth.
There hanging down was two bodies.
Bodies that were covered in blood, and headless.
The heads were below them. The eyes where open, but they were white. They were also covered in blood. I recognized the two bodies. It was the body of my two best friends.
Mel and Maggie.
Tears started down my cheeks. More tears. I was now sobbing.
I didn't want to sit, there was blood everywhere. Crimson blood.
Mel and Maggie had so much to live for. They had a whole life ahead them.
They were only 16.
I sobbed and sobbed.
Why is this happening? Why did it have to be me? Why, why , why, why!?
"Well Jenna, there's a simple answer for that question," said a quiet voice.
John. He's here. Again.
'Yes, yes I am here. It's so simple to use you mortals," he laughed.
Amuse in his voice. And evil.
"Well, to answer that question is because you have murder my wife like I said before. Oh and because of your family killing mine," he said.
"JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!" I screamed at the top of my lungs.
"Hush hush. You've made me more angrier. Look at my eyes. There raging with anger. Raging to kill you. To destroy you!" He yelled.
Then I couldn't breathe. A mirror appeared in front of me. I screamed at what I saw.
I saw myself. Covered in blood, from head to toes. I was crimson red. There was this disgusting blue, black and purple lump in my throat. It was the size of my fist.
I was suffocating. I was gasping for air.
"And now the fun part, ha-ha," He laughed like a maniac.
I was dangling from a rope on the ceiling. It was wrapped around me. The mirror was still in fornt of me. I would have screamed but I couldn't. I would just let out a gasp of air as my scream. My throat, it was bigger, it was getting bigger and bigger.
I didn't know what to do. I couldn't save myself. How was I to save myself? HOW?
John was approaching me. I grin was on his face. Not a pleasant grin. In his hand was a sword. I didn't know what I should expect.
"Well, you should expect a "surprise" my dear," he sneered.
More and more tears rushing down, dropping to the floor.
"Surprise!" he shouted with a smile.
With that I blacked out.
Blood, part two.
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I saw myself. On the floor this time. My eyes widen at what I saw. I was on the floor, covered in crimson red blood. But what was missing was my head. All I saw was the rest of my body. Lifeless. I slowly rose my head to look at the ceiling. I couldn't speak, I just couldn't. My head, just my head was above dangling. The rope was around half of my neck. Blood dripping down on my lifeless body below. The eyes were different then Mel's and Maggie's. Mine had blood shot eyes. Red. It was too disgusting to look.
I saw John from the corner of my eye. I slowly turned my head towards him. He was beside my body, ripping out my arms and legs and my guts and eating them. Eating them like a monster. He tore chunks of my arms with his razor sharp teeth. Blood was dripping down the sides of his mouth has he ate. I could look anymore.
I knew I was dead. I was still in that same room, except my spirit was looking at my dead, lifeless, half eaten body. I turned around and saw a white light. I started walking towards the light.
I was getting closer and closer.
Finally I was in front of it. I place my hand through it and I stepped in.
White dress.
White Wings.
I was in heaven, away from the monsters.
I was finally at peace.
By Spicychic18
aka Susan (:
the yellow ribbon:
Jenna wore a yellow ribbon around her neck everyday of her life. And I mean everyday, rain or shine, whether it matched her outfit or not. It really annoyed her best friend John. he had known Jenna since she was three.they were in high school together,and it bothered him.
“Why do you wear that yellow ribbon around your neck, Jenna?” he’d ask her every day. But she would just change the subject and not tell him.
Still, John thought she was cute. He asked her to the soda shoppe for an ice cream sundae. Then he asked her to watch him play in the football game. Then he started seeing her home and he got closer to her as each day passed.... Jenna always said yes when he asked her out. And she always wore a yellow dress to match the ribbon around her neck.
It finally occurred to John that he and Jenna were going steady, but he still didnt know why she wore the yellow ribbon around her neck. So he asked her about it again, and again she did not tell him. “Maybe someday I’ll tell you about it,” she’d reply. Someday! That answer annoyed John, but he shrugged it off, because Jenna was so cute and fun to be with.
Well, time flew past, as it has a habit of doing, and one day John proposed to Jenna and she accepted. They planned a big wedding, and Jenna hinted that she might tell him about the yellow ribbon around her neck on their wedding day. But somehow, what with the preparations and his beautiful bride, and the lovely reception, John never got to asking Jenna about it. And when he did remember, she got a bit teary-eyed, and said: “We are so happy together, what difference does it make?” And John decided she was right.
John and Jenna raised a happy family of four, with the usual ups and downs. When their anniversary came around, John once again asked Jenna about the yellow ribbon around her neck. It was the first time he’d brought it up sine after their wedding. Whenever their children asked him about it, he’d always hushed them, and somehow none of the kids had dared ask their mother. Jenna gave John as sad look and said: “Johnny, you’ve waited this long. You can wait a little while longer.”
And John agreed. It was not until Jenna was on her death bed a year later that John, seeing his last chance of finding out about the ribbon slip away, asked Jenna one final time about the yellow ribbon she wore around her neck. She shook her head a bit, and then said with a sad smile: “Okay John, you can go ahead and untie it.”
With shaking hands, John fiddled for the knot and untied the yellow ribbon around his wife's neck.
And Jenna’s head fell off.
(i hope you like it, i wrote it in year 5 so it might not be very good but its the only scary story i wrote :) )
I slammed myself against the wall, letting a large crash echo through the ghostly halls. It was here, somewhere. I had to move fast, it knew that I was on the second floor. I quickly moved along the corridor, attempting to make no noise, however my mind played my footsteps like crashes of thunder, resulting in feelings of helplessness and doom. I was limping, its teeth marks had ripped my knee and my shoulder is bruised from struggling to get Jenna up as it launched itself onto us. Was Jenna alive? Or had the beast, the hunting werewolf claimed her?
As I moved I sensed a slight noise behind me. I stood paralysingly still, not even daring to breathe. Silence. I moved and with a minute I heard a creep. Minutes later, another creep, but scarily closer. I was in shock to the point where I couldn’t move. The werewolf’s presence loomed, I was sure of it. I slightly moved one foot, then the other, managing to take a small step. My heart was in my throat as I heard a step, which sounded more like a dog than human to me. I started to shake uncontrollably. I slowly stepped and then stepped again, managing to walk at a slow pace. Within seconds, a heard quick running paws coming my way.
I screamed and managed to start running as I flew towards the staircase. I was 100 meters from the street where hopefully someone could save me. I turned and saw the huge canine mass follow me, snarling, with blood and flesh dripping from its teeth. Jenna...she was gone. It was much quicker then me, but I turned the corners quickly, darting objects which slowed its journey. But I heard it coming, closer...closer. I felt the air swoosh at my ankles, its swipe had been millimetres from taking me. The staircase was only 5 meters away when it jumped onto my back. It relentlessly ripped at me, sending myself to an agonising death. It took Jenna, and then it took me. It had taken every child who had carelessly wandered into the mystic mansion with sole intensions of candy. So when you go trick or treating this Halloween, beware.
It was a gloomy day; the skies were grey and overcast, the clouds were like thick black plumes of smoke. As the rain fell, heavy drops formed murky pools of water along Findurlove's route home from school. For the past few days leading up to halloween, Findurlove had been troubled by disembodied voices; at school, during the night, at the mall, even in the church. Ignoring them made no difference and knowing no-one would take her seriosuly, she had nobody to confide in about these voices.
Halloween celebrations began early; with pumpkin shaped pancakes for breakfast and her younger sister, Filipinhamaria, already dressed for trick or treating in the evening! As always, Emorox4eva and John_2_el_mejor called around on the way to school and they set off for another day of mind-numbing maths and gruelling geography!
It wasn't until lunch time until the voices made themselves apparent to Findurlove yet again; only this time it was different. Whereas before, she was unable to make out any words, this time she could hear the words 'midnight' and 'crematorium'. Now she knew she couldn't suffer this alone anymore and asked her two best friends for help; both of whom, were surprisingly understanding and willing to help!
The evening couldn't come quick enough and they all met up at Emorox4eva's house to get ready. Once trick or treating was over and they were sure everyone else was in bed, they left through the bedroom window and made their way to the crematorium. As they grew nearer, the voices grew louder until they clamoured to a deafening pitch before abruptly stopping dead. Ahead of them the shadows cast across the ground were wildly transforming into wild shapes as the trees madly rattled despite the night being still. Together they moved slowly and silently towards the commotion, eyes wide with fear and bodies shaking violently with terror. There, before them, stood a ramshackled crumbling building that never before existed but was drawing them in against their will.
Inside was filled with a deep glowing aura, the source of which,lay behind a large wooden door in front of them. John_2_el_mejor crept forwards and pushed the door open. As it creaked to a halt, they stood, aghast, at the sight before them.
There, in a circle, stood the ghosts of hundred of children amongst candles, chanting with pale lifeless eyes and almost rigid bodies. The three friends stood at the door unnoticed until the chanting stopped. It was too much for Findurlove as she turned to flee but was held to the spot by thick ivy that was strangling their ankles, preventing them from going anywhere. Suddenly a cackle echoed out across the room as two familiar faces entered behind them.
It was two girls from school, Colleenp87 and MissCunha. Their faces were filled with evil as they joined the child ghosts and commenced the chanting. Then out of nowhere, a flash of blinding light lit up the building and the sound of screaming rang in their ears. They couldn't see a thing as they fell to the ground and everything seemed to fade away around them. The cold night air chilled their skin as they awoke on the grass. They had been saved. Ewonline, another school friend, had found out about Colleenp87 and MissCunha's dabbling with the afterlife and had known what was going to happen. Together they returned to Emorox4eva's house and agreed not to mention what happened ever again.
Colleenp87 and MissCunha never returned to school; years passed and they were forgotten about, lost in the dark depths of history. Let this be a lesson to anyone planning to contact the dead...
It won't let me post my story for some reason. Is there a way I can send you it in an email??
The House
Halloween-yaaay,said filipinahamaria.She always loved Halloween.That`s almost favourite day in the year to her.Every year her friends;findurlove and emorox4eva visited all houses in neighbourhood.Every house except one-the House.
Filipinhamaria tried to talk her friends into going there,but they would`t listen.They said it was a haunted.Was it really?-she thought.Nobody lived there.Nobody liked it.Parents didn`t let children play near it.Children were scared and parents talked about it under theit breath.Was it really haunted,or is that just one stupid,story?
But filipinhamaria decided to find out that by her self.She said to her friends she will go there but they didn`t listen to her...It was almost midnight when she woke up.She heard someone crying.Or was it just the wind?Then she heard terrible sound.And it was coming from that House.Then there it was again.She jumped out of the bed and ran to the window.She couldn` see anything.All of sudden,the window opened and an icy wind cut trough her.She was all wet.At that moment her sister,bluegreen86 rushed in.Bluegreen86 ask her:What are you doing?Do you want catch a cold?I heard someone crying,I think it was coming from the House-said filipinhamaria.Don`t be .It`s only the wind-said bluegreen86.She left her room.Filipinhamaria tried to sleep but she couldn`t.Then she heard it again.Now was be terrible screaming.She isn`t imagining that.It was real.Somebody was crying and screaming in the House in the same time.She got up,opened the door of her room and listened.Everybody was sleeping.She went down the stairs and sneaked out of the house.She saw someone shaddow in the yard of the House.It was looking like a her very good friend John_2_el_mejor.But she thought she only imagines that...In a second,she was at the door of the House.She has never been so close to the House.Knock,knock.The door opened by itself.Her heart was beating fast,she was shaking from fear.She could hardly breath.Run back home!Run!-she thought.Instead she went in.The doors are creaked.It was dark.A fire was burning in the fireplace.She went there and sat in huge armchair.It`s not spooky at all,is it?-Who could possibly appear....or maybe disappeared...
Next morning,when her sister bluegreen86 woke up.She go to filipinhamaria room and she didn`t find her.She was so scared about her.Her sister,filipinhamaria disappeared.But only John_2_el_mejor know what is wrong...he finally did what he always want to...he never likes filipinhamaria....and now she is gone...gone..maybe forever...
Avril14140
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Masquerade
In the town of Eerie, Halloween was a lifetstyle not a holiday it was a day when the wall between the deceased
and living broke, where chaos had started but never ended. LittleLadyJ and Emorox4eva were throwing a
halloween party just like every year, except this one would be in the ancient Halleway mansion. There was a legend that Ewonline
Halleway had died on October 31, 1959. Ewoline was 17 when she died, nobody knew how they just knew it was on the night that
she had thrown her own halloween party filled with hundreds of guests dancing the night away. They had found her dead, her body was
found in a graveyard with a note in her hand with the words "I will be back". It was said that in 50 years on Halloween Night her spirit
would rise up and take another's life so she can be reincarnated. LittleLadyJ and Emorox4eva didn't believe in the legend but had liked
the idea that there was one and found it to be the perfect place for a halloween party. This time they had put a twist on it, the halloween party was now a
Masquerade Ball, everybody was required to be wearing masks and they would reveal their faces at midnight. Emorox4eva was in charge of planning where the
decorations would be, she started by going into the graveyard, chills started to creep up her spine, the wind was blowing against her black hair startling
her a bit. Emorox4eva thought she could hear something or somebody trying to talk to her, she looked around her nobody was there she thought to herself you're
just scaring yourself there's nobody there, she nervously laughed trying to calm her fears. There were a bunch of withered flowers that were dead and spread
out on a tombstone Emorox4eva walked closer towards it, the air suddenly felt colder and it felt like little snowflakes were dancing on her skin.
She kept walking towards the tombstone like she was hypnotized, she brushed away the flowers that were covering the name, there engraved in stone was the
name Ewoline Halleway 1959, her body suddendly was lifted and was pushed back into the ground. Right before Emorox4eva lost conciousness a figure
appeared before her whispering these 3 words, "I'll be back."
Masquerade(2)
"EMOROX4EVA! ARE YOU AWAKE?" LittleLadyJ yelled concerningly at her friend. Emorox4eva forced a smile to her lips trying to reassure her that she was alright.
She tried to flash back to what happened but her head just kept pounding at her skull like her mind didn't want her to remember, didn't want her to know. After
she reasurred her whole family she was alright for about 1000 times they finally left. LittleLadyJ stayed at her side not wanting to leave, once it was quiet
LittleLadyJ spoke, "You saw something at the graveyard didn't you?". Emorox4eva avoided making eye contact trying to hide her emotion. "you did....I saw it too"
whispered LittleLadyJ. Emorox4eva whipped her head around and looked her in the eye and said, "whatever it was it, it's warning us and this was just the
beginning.". "What do we do?" asked LittleLadyJ. "I don't know, but we have to throw this party it's too late to cancel it." That night Emorox4eva fell into a
deep slumber she dreamt of a spirit arising from the ground and taking the life of a young girl. She suddenly jolted awake sweat covering her face, she tried to
calm herself done reminding herself it was just a dream nothing to be scared of, but the image of the girl stayed in her mind. Later that morning Emorox4eva came
over to LittleLadyJ's house to finish the planning for the party, it was only 2 days away. As they were discussing the menu outside a piece of newspaper blew towards
them, LittleLadyJ quickly grabbed it and had a puzzled face on her look. "What is it?" questioned Emorox4eva. "It's some picture of a girl." answered LittleLadyJ.
LittleLadyJ passed the piece of newspaper over to Emorox4eva her face froze, it wasn't a picture of just a girl it was Ewoline Halleway with the title in bold
EWOLINE HALLEWAY FOUND DEAD! Emorox4eva was in horror, her body was covered in fear now. "It's Ewoline......" Emorox4eva said in a voice barely above a whisper.
LittleLadyJ gasped in a second her face turned to pale white her body shooken. "She's coming after us, SHE WANTS US!" LittleLadyJ hysterically said. "We need to
stop her" Emorox4eva said. "How?" asked LittleLadyJ frantically. "I don't know we'll find a way, she won't take any of us I promise." Emorox4eva whispered.
Masquerade (3)
Emorox4eva and LittleLadyJ were putting final touches to their Halloween party for that night. They knew that Ewoline would be coming tonight to take revenge on another
victim, it just so happened they would be the victim. Time flew by and guests started arriving in the mansion, LittleLadyJ and Emoroxeva welcomed each guest warmly wishing
them a Happy Halloween. After what felt like hours all the guests stopped arriving there were at least 1000 guests packed into the mansion dancing as the DJ entertained them.
LittleLadyJ wanted to party with them too but knew that she had a mission to do. Emorox4eva and LittleLadyJ didn't exactly have a plan except they knew her spirit would come
to them and they had a special elixir to destroy her. They went with eachother every where they went to make sure each of them was safe. LittleLadyJ had went to the little girls
room and Emorox4eva waited by the door scanning her eyes around suspiciously. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" screamed LittleLadyJ. Emorox4eva was suddenly even more scared than she ever
was she took charge and broke down the bathroom door. The window was open and smashed. Emorox4eva ran out of the bathroom as fast and she could, she knew Ewoline had taken her
bestfriend and she knew where Ewoline had taken her, the graveyard. Emorox4eva was there standing in the graveyard in a fighting stance yelling "FACE ME NOW EWOLINE HALLEWAY!"
"HAHA well aren't you just precious." a voice whispered. Emorox4eva looked all around searching for the body that belonged to the voice. A figure suddenly appeared in front of her.
Emorox4eva gasped ut was a girl that looked exactly like her, her skin porcelin and her hair in a golden shade of blonde. "wwhhhoo are you?" Emorox4eva stuttered.
"Well I'm Ewoline of course." Whispered the figure. "You can't be!" Emoroxeva blurted. "But I am, you are me Emorox4eva." Eowline whispered softly. "How?" Emoroxeva delicately said.
"You looked different in the photo" Emorox4eva calmy said. "That wasn't me that was my bestfriend, they got it all wrong." Emorox4eva suddenly broke down, "Where's LittleLadyJ?" A confused
Emorox4eva asked. " I had to kill her, she was taken over by a evil spirit and was plotting to kill you, Emorox4eva you are a reincarnation of me I didn't want you to die like how I did
"Ewoline said quietly. "YOU LIAR!" LittleLadyJ said as she staggered up from behind a tombstone looking like she could die in any minute now. Emorox4eva rushed over to her friend, she didn't
know why after all that Ewoline said she just knew in her gut that something was wrong. "YOU STUPID LITTLE CHILD, I THOUGHT I GOT RID OF YOU!" screamed an outraged Ewoline, suddenly her whole face
changed revealing her true identity, she looked exactly as she did in the picture, strong cheekbones, plump lips and eyes that were so intense that they breathed horror. "It's time to finish both of
you off." screamed a terrifying EWoline."No I won't let you." screamed Emorox4eva as she threw the elixir at Ewoline. HAHA YOU THOUGHT THAT WOULD DO ANY GOOD, WELL YOU WERE WRONG." Yelled Ewoline.
All the elixir did was give her about 3 minutes of pain but not enough to kill her. Blackness circled around Emorox4eva as she fell unconcious.
Masquerade(4/Final)
"Honey are you awake?" questioned Emorox4evas mother conceringly. "I'm fine what happened?" questioned Emorox4eva? Her mother looked away "LittleLadyJ was murdered" whispered her mother. Tears filled
Emorox4evas eyes slowly dripping down her chin and onto her throat. Everything came back to her so clearly Ewoline had spared her life but had killed LittleLadyJ right at the stroke of midnight with a
single hit to her chest causing blood to pour out. The last words Ewoline said were "I want you to suffer". And as blackness had surrounded Emoroxeva she remembered those last words LittleLadyJ
said that would haunt her for the rest of eternity "You promised."
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